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And as I sat bleeding beneath the moon,
My breath grew heavy, my head did swoon

His body lay before me, sprawled upon the ground,
Where once briefly sat pain, he now makes no sound.

He cut into my flesh,
And I did lay him to his eternal rest.

How cruel this world,
To turn us to our worst from our best.



Crappy poem is crappy.

You know that old saying, "An artist's work is never finished, only abandoned"? Well, that's exactly what happened here. The more I worked ont his, the less I liked it. It's still okay, I guess, but it just seemed to be less and less impressive as I went. So I have a sort of love/hate view in it.

I had wanted to do something a little different, which the poem alludes to, but it didn't flow properly. Oh well. I'm not gonna fuck with it anymore.

Also, I have no idea how or why there is an aura around him. o.O Especially sine I specifically tried to avoid it. >.>

©~Niv

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